BR 1-08: Mum to the Rescue

Mum and dad went to a car boot sale with their children. They looked at a dinghy. Mum wanted the dinghy, so she called her children. The children looked at the dinghy for the first time. And they bought it and put it on the car. So they took a picnic and went to the river. Dad looked at the river and he pointed at the weir and he said, "The weir is dangerous".
It was a time for picnic the day. The river was busy. Children watched the boats go by. They likes a big boat. After they played, it was a time to go home. But on the way, there is nobody on that boat. And a lady asked us for help. So mum put the dinghy in the river and she padded to the boat. Mum climbed the boat and brought the boat back. After that, dad let go of the dinghy rope. So it went over the weir. But the lady  lend us her boat. The family had  a good holiday on the boat.

It was a very interesting story. I was very surprised because mum rescued the boat. She is very stout! I have never ride a big boat. I read this story I wanted to ride it! In this spring vacation, I went to amusement park in Fukuoka with my friends. At that time,  I ride a boat like a dinghy. It was very interesting! So I want to ride again!
Last March, I got a drivers license. So sometimes I drive a car. But I have not my car. So I ride a father's car. Car is very useful, so I want to my car.

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Roderick, Hunt. (1996). Mum to the Rescue. Oxford University Press.