BR2-05: Kipper's Birthday

"It was kipper's birthday." (Hunt, 1989, p. 1)

Kipper wanted to a party. So he send some letters to his friends. So everyone wanted to come. Mum made a cake, sandwich, some cookies and so on. Everyone came to the party. And they gave him good present. They enjoyed playing a game and watching television. It was a good party and they had a very good time.

When I was a child, everyone came to my party. I invited some friends. Of course, they gave me some present. I was very happy. I am twins, so there were two big cakes. So I could eat different cakes. And my mother and grandmather made a lot of delicious foods. It was a very exciting time. Now I don't held a birthday party. So I want to held my birthday party and I want to invited my family and friends!

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Roderick, Hunt. (1989). Kipper's Birthday. Oxford University Press.