Essay 2-01a: My favorite places

I live in Japan and I live in Kumamoto. Kumamoto have many famous places and beautiful natures. So I will introduce Kumamoto and other favorite my places.


I like Kumamoto city. There are a lot of places. For example, shopping place, Kumamoto Gakuen University, Kumamoto Castle and so on. Sometimes I go to Shimotouri and Kamitouri. There are a lot of clothe shops, food shops and cosmetic shop. I like to go there. I enjoyed shopping! KGU is my university. There are a lot of good friends and teachers.

My hometown is Kikuchi. Kikuchi have many hot springs. My favorite hot spring is Shichijyou Onsen Dome. It was big and there are various hot springs. Recently I didn't go but I want to go there with my family. But my favorite place is my bedroom. Because there is very comfortable and feel quite!

Sometimes I go to Fukuoka.  I went there by bus with my sister. Because there are a lot of shopping places. So I can enjoy shopping. And there is my relative in Fukuoka. Their name is Emika and Haruka. They are 6 years old and 4 years old. I like to play with them. They are so cute! Sometimes they came back to Kumamoto. So I want to go somewhere with them. Next time, I want to Fukuoka and Nagasaki with my friend, Anna. We are going to go shopping and eat delicious foods. My friend live in Nagasaki and she goes to university. So we are going to go her house. I am so exciting!

I have never been abroad. But in this summer vacation, I went to Korea with my friends. It was a very good place. There were a lot of shops and street stalls. I was very excited! Especially I like "Hottoku". It was very good! So I ate it two times.



Japan have a lot of beautiful and nice places. I want to go many places in Japan. And I want to go abroad, too!

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W2: My favorite clothes

Sometimes I go to buy clothes with my family. We often go Hikarinomori to buy them. Because there are a lot of cute clothes and there are various shops. For example, there are clothes shops, MacDonald’s, sushi, general dealer, supermarket and so on. So I like to go there. I bought many clothes, bags, accessory and so on. My family also bought various things there. I have a sister. So we borrow and lend clothes each other. Recently I didn't go there so I want to go!

And I go to Simamura to buy some clothes. Because there is near my house and the clothes are very cheaper and cute! So I like the shop. I like to buy clothes so I want to many cute clothes!

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W1: My favorite foods

My favorite foods are crape, yakiniku and some sweets. I like crape very much! Sometimes I bought it after school with my friends. Recently I didn’t eat it. So I want to buy it! And I like yakiniku, too! Sometimes I ate it in my house with my family. But yesterday I went to eat yakiniku with my friend Anna and Miki. I’ve always wanted to go to eat yakiniku. So I was looking forward to eat it! So we went there after school. So we were very hungry. We ate pork back rids, sparerib, takoyaki, bibimbap and so on. But especially, my favorite food is small intestine. Because I like to eat hormone. I like it but Miki didn’t like it. Finally we ate ice cream! It was very good! We were full, so I couldn’t eat no more. We enjoyed eating and talking very much! If I have a chance I want to go again with them!

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